Ok, I like the Village, daplunk, but I am sort of with Jay_NOLA; I think it needs...more? A smithy, a common hall, a kennel, a stable, maybe some sort of "inn" or the like where the characters can rest.
Also, what is the scale on the map, I can't tell, but it seems about 1 foot squares, no? that doesn't seem unreasonable, making the big round tent 9' across, and the long tent about 7' x 11'; good for a small barbarian family (father, mother, child and infant), but that only leaves this village big enough for 6 families.
I hope you don't take this as overly critical, I don't mean to be.