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The Last Parsec

Thanks! You made pretty quick work of that one. I haven't even looked a WW1, let alone done any work on it.
 
Thanks, dartnet! That's a lot of good work.

I've gone through it and noticed a few missing items and other nitpicks. I'm not sure if you're still working on them, but I figured I would mention them:

Missing:

Edge
- Improved Gravitic Acclimation (Source: Eris Beta-V)

Equipment
- Survival Pack (Eris Beta-V): cost is $3500 vs $3955+ for individual items; that makes it worth including, I think.

Hindrances
- Lethargic (Eris Beta-V)
- Void Sickness (Eris Beta-V)

Modifications
- Aquatic (Eris Beta-V)

Race
- Darpan (Scientorium): also requires "Outsider (Darpan)" racial property

Ranged Weapon
- Net Gun (TLP Core)
- Spray Stick (TLP Core)
- Stun Grenade (Eris Beta-V)

Nitpicks:

Edge
- Explorer (Leviathan): Different description from other products' versions; Survival PreReq should be d8+
- Scout (Leviathan): Missing Notice (d6+) & Survival (d6+) PreReqs

Race
- Poth'tox (TLP Core): Misspelled as "Poth'Tot"

Ranged Weapon
- Tranquilizer Pistol and Tranquilizer Rifle (Leviathan) : this is a minor one - they're classified as Modern weapons; I think the facts that they're not in any modern setting book and the greatly increased prices should qualify them as Futuristic. That's just my opinion though, YMMV.
 
Ok real quick: Source: Eris Beta-V I don't have this PDF. So that will be later when I get it.

Darpan (Scientorium) I don't own this PDf yet.

- Net Gun (TLP Core)
- Spray Stick (TLP Core) are in the special weapons.

Other stuff fixed and file updated and posted.
 
Thanks again, dartnet.

Since I use it so seldom I tend to forget about the Special Weapons tab in the editor so I forgot to check there for the net gun and spray stick. Sorry for any confusion.
 
No worries thanks for the feedback. If you wish to go over my other files for mistakes feel free I am sure I needs some proof reading.
 
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